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"Traces" |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
In a language we've forgot there are words we can't recall, which might help explain alot, or some part, however small. But, the truth is, it does not, for the most part, we pretend, adding layer upon layer to this means without an end. Where we search outside the lines, hoping once to "get it right", something flickers then, is gone, would we could attain its' light. When the language we've forgot and the words we can't recall leave behind the slightest trace they were ever here at all |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc...so true! I like the traces of humor in this and the way you play with words.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
kinda sad to me...but maybe it's just my mood |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Reminded me of my forgetful mind actually, and heck I laugh that off, and know it couldn't have mattered much. Enjoyed the humor of a serious topic actually. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
geez, Dr., I forgot was I was going to say here.....it was right on the tip of my tongue....lol. Seriously, this poem can be interpreted a couple of ways and maybe, there is a much more serious tone to it, huh? Anyway, I liked it very much. ....jo |
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