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Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time

0 posted 2005-09-02 03:49 PM


Took me a long time to understand
Strayed near enough enough times but never understood the slight look and the business look

Always looked with the slight look but that is for fools or people who want you think they are fools

Business look sees as you really are doesn't mess knows you for what you are

Vague look

When was a look vague

Business look says

"Are you worth the effort"

Business look sees the real

Bodger

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1 posted 2005-09-02 04:02 PM


thought-provoking, for sure
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2 posted 2005-09-04 09:45 AM


yep, gets ya thinking:

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2005-09-04 01:11 PM


Thanks Lady and Lady

Maybe  I written those other words for your words echoing "how deep are our words" and how "wrong" are people who lack the guts, and the rest of my words are edited out by me.

Bodger

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