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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2005-08-11 12:56 PM





Somewhere along seemingly
frazzled edges lie strength
unimaginable
bird flighty determination and
direction         though wings
oft speak of fragilty

Upon obscure pages
an illusionist twirls before
curious eyes of all & none
then disappears singing,

"...twelfth of never"


~tier

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-08-11 01:01 PM


wow!
RMW
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2 posted 2005-08-11 01:22 PM


Excellent, Tiersdin. Bob
Tiersdin
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3 posted 2005-08-11 01:52 PM


Appreciative hugs to you both!


~tier

LeeJ
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4 posted 2005-08-11 03:08 PM


Somewhere along seemingly
frazzled edges lie strength
unimaginable


You had me at hello!!!

Tremendous opening...gripping and wanting more...well done, thank you for writing and sharing!

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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2005-08-11 04:57 PM


until then ...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime55
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6 posted 2005-08-11 05:01 PM


Oh yes....Perfect...*big hugs*

Tiersdin
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7 posted 2005-08-11 05:31 PM


LeeJ, thank you for such an insightful comment.

Interloper, where hast thou been?  Good to see your name here.

Startime, even bigger hugs back to you!

thank you all,

~tier

wranx
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8 posted 2005-08-13 10:09 PM


I didn't comment on this?

Shame on me!

Pure Tiersdin, once more

Dark Angel
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9 posted 2005-08-14 05:58 AM


Oh shame on me too!

sigh, magnificent Tier

Mxx

~i want for myself your trembling~

littlewing
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10 posted 2005-08-14 11:36 AM


bird flighty determination and
direction         though wings
oft speak of fragilty


peeking into my brain, eh?

Tiersdin
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11 posted 2005-08-14 01:30 PM


Thanx, Wranx!  *grin*

Maree, a true compliment coming from a talented one such as yourself.  Thank you!

LittleWing, you know what they say, "birds of a feather..."


Thank you all again,
~tier

iliana
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12 posted 2005-08-15 12:45 PM


Tiersdin.......very much enjoyed.  Really lovely writing.   .....jo
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