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EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2005-03-13 12:51 PM


Remember when we danced
where angels came to dance?
Within those hallowed halls?
Where angels came
To light the flames
to unleash our Gaian waterfalls

Tears in the rain aye
Tears in the rain.
A whisper in time eternal.

Aye, within those hallowed halls,
A legend was born.
We shook the earth

The queen of the elves herself was there
and i could look not beyond her eyes
The seven sages,
The Majestic 12,
The Anukai themselves.

Aye, within those hallowed halls,
We moved mountains
A life in birth.

Tearsin the rain aye
Tears in the rain
For all to see
who hath wrought
thier souls upon
this seraphic crystalline sea
of dreams

We screamed

"Remember me."

and cried.

I scream, I scream
farewell
I scream, I scream GOODBYE
Farewell, and never come back
I cry


and 'tis of thee

Age to age
or face to face

remember,
in love,

most importantly

CONFUCIOUS SAY: YOU STAND ON TOILET, YOU HIGH ON POT!


© Copyright 2005 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-03-13 02:01 PM


Fantastic write Joseph!!
Very much enjoyed the read.

~ Love, like magic, depends on believing. ~

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-03-14 01:29 AM


~Enjoyed ,I liked the title!

~ARh

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A
3 posted 2005-03-14 01:53 AM


great read, loved the honest emotions

New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything. For the heart is an organ of fire

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