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0 posted 2005-03-07 07:14 PM


Life offers you a relief,
Just take some of this and believe,
You think I be smoking and getting high,
Nah, I just sell it and leave you hanging dry,
You feel the need to get some more,
Your desire feels my pocket more,
I see you got stuck in rut,
With no one to turn, but
Me, I got this plan,
You know bringing home a wife,
And if few months, she gave
Me a new life,
A little hood rat just like me,
But hes got chances that I never did,
He’ll grow up to be twice as tall,
I am right there to make sure he don’t fall,
See you supply me with the dough,
To keep my wife form being a hoe,
I work on these dealings,
Play with your feelings,
Before you can bounce back-
Your feet stoop,
And your heart stops the beat.
Mic check.


I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-03-07 07:17 PM


hmmmm... all together too real...  It's good to read something out of the ordinary like this.  It makes one think...

          sadie

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