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Open Poetry #35

genre of agape

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-04-22 10:54 AM

you were as strong songed
as they were fragile voiced
your perfection was the flaw
of their glass reflections

the etching of acetone
by artist's with echos

I imagined you often
tending the low greenery
of the monastery
and of your gown edges

unraveling the confessions
of a babbling brook

of you hurrying to my amber then
and assundering your composure
for my inspection and infection
and of the tan of you after

when I was your adopted sun

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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-04-22 11:03 AM

the last line said it all for me, but then theres this:

of you hurrying to my amber then
and assundering your composure
for my inspection and infection
and of the tan of you after

now that's love!!!!

Perfection