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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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was she just another dragon in a glass with soft feet that didn't hurt my ego when she devoured the whispers of my mind puppy spit from temple dogs is still saliva but kisses are considered gifts isn't that right judas or did the hanged man take your tongue to make a purse for maiden's coins when they danced their veils at the window's store for the eyes of mirrors and old men without dreams welcome now to my sin, godiva ______________ dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
puppy spit from temple dogs is still saliva but kisses are considered gifts isn't that right judas or did the hanged man take your tongue Ouchy!!! You take words, and in a few short strokes can reach the other side...you paint more then visuals, but true emotions Good Morning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Better than warm chocolate... good morning, Sir... long time no write.  |
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freewheelin Member
since 2005-04-09
Posts 53 |
haunting though wonderful write. the second stanza has some killer lines. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Your pen bares a sharp edge in this - I love it when you're edgy - Morning hon - S  If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dark~ This is WONDERFUL !!! I'm saving it to read again and again~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
OUCH~ My spirit will rise |
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