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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-04-14 05:28 AM



Feel my breath,
warm, hot,
soothing,

Taste my lips,
sweet, juicy,
enticing,

Fingers feel,
soft skin,
pressing,

Passion burns,
lighting fire,
desire....

"Let me not to the marriage of true minds
Admit impediments; love is not love
Which alters when it alteration finds,
Or bends with the remover to

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2005-04-14 10:55 AM


Spring's desire to awaken passion for life flows in your veins!

Love, Margherita

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-04-14 01:57 PM


another lovely piece
DavePage
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3 posted 2005-04-14 03:00 PM


It must be a hot region of the country Romantic

Dave

ThUnDeRkYsS
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4 posted 2005-04-14 04:35 PM


Um, er... heh heh.  Yeah.  "Touching" piece my dear girl, indeed

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.



ShiningWindHaze
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since 2004-09-06
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5 posted 2005-04-14 07:23 PM


I remember feeling such things.
It seems now that such feelings are fake.
Although I know they're real..
What is it that keeps us held to them?
My heart aches thinking that people can desire without a true fire..
I have seen it too many times.

- Kaos

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2005-04-15 04:57 AM


Indeed...desirable...James
LeeJ
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7 posted 2005-04-15 11:40 AM


proof that life is a true word then anything imaginable....

lovely write

MGROVES
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8 posted 2005-04-17 08:01 AM


very passionate~
nice~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

MGROVES
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9 posted 2005-04-17 11:31 AM


very nice~
full of passion~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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10 posted 2005-04-17 12:37 PM


sensually succinct
yv
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11 posted 2005-04-17 04:26 PM


Enchanting.  I felt every single word of that masterpiece.  Can't wait to read more of your intense passion.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Italy Angel
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Northern Ca
12 posted 2005-04-17 11:36 PM


A passionate piece. Loved the opening very much. Brava, Bella.
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