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HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2005-02-17 01:18 AM

I Thought You Should Know

Going through heartaches
Somehow I will survive
I thought you should know
That I was still alive

I remain in the same place
Heartache lingering on
I thought you should know
I had not moved on

I know it was only my heart
Yet I shared it with you
I thought you should know
It is breaking in two

As my heart silently weeps
You have been missed
I thought you should know
That Hope still exists

It is a heart without closure
Inside this letter I send
I thought you should know
Signed forever friend

Hope©2005

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2005-02-17 01:25 AM

oh, this touches my heart, so sad,
sending you a big hug

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-02-17 01:49 AM

Hope, this was a lovely poem. I feel the ache.

....jo

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2005-02-17 10:28 AM

I know it was only my heart
Yet I shared it with you
I thought you should know
It is breaking in two

Oh, the ache of this... excellent!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-17 12:14 PM

he seems like a jerk!

he doesn't deserve these lovely words of yours!

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2005-04-16 02:51 PM

Quiet words Hope

Dave

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2005-04-16 10:10 PM

This just touches my heart. I have felt this kind of pain. I hope your pain eases, soon.

Beki
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA

7 posted 2005-04-17 12:41 PM

"As my heart silently weeps
You have been missed
I thought you should know
That Hope still exists"

love this play on words!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2005-04-17 01:02 PM

Such melancholy, but Hope still exists.
Yes in both meanings.
Love the quiet flow of this.
Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2005-04-17 02:16 PM

"I thought you should know
That Hope still exists"

~ It's good to know that hope and "Hope" still exists!

A heart-touching write.

Linda

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

10 posted 2005-04-17 04:04 PM

That was beautful. Simply elegant. I hope whoever this is addressed to receives the message loud and clear.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Italy Angel
Member

since 2003-09-01

Posts 65
Northern Ca

11 posted 2005-04-17 11:50 PM

Awww...this is very sorrowful. I think we all often wonder what ever happened to someone in our past and if they ever knew how they hurt us. Hugs!

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