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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-04-12 09:44 PM



shed a tear cause I can no longer
see you,as you sail to see I can
no longer be with you.

For you have gone astray I've been
here waiting for you but you left me
anyway.

The salt of the sea is no match
for the tears I cried for you.
your touch I shall never feel
your love I can never have for my
love for you never has been truly
released.

At least for that I am greatful
you don't deserve this such love
to be thrown away like some old
pieace of paper that has stains of
coffee and ashes.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2005-04-13 03:48 AM


sad
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-04-13 04:29 AM


Nice writing...James
Foxyoasis
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Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2005-04-13 02:03 PM


thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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