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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-04-10 07:25 PM



Sail into my life help me go
away take me to another day
so heart me again take your
posion and wilds and make me
happy again.

The spark in my eyes is what sets
me free when im with you I feel
like I can truly be me no more
hiding pretending or fearing
of being myself.

For when im with you I don't want
to be no one else but who I am.

Wrap your arms around me so tight
hold me really tight lay me down on
the bed and smoother me with your
kindess your eyes how the piearce
my very being.

The clouds lift me away to a scary
grey and dark place the fear of
it all breaking away I say to hell with
it this ride is my kind of style happy
and worth while. I go on blindly and
hopeful as I am on this coaster ride
with you.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-04-11 09:35 AM


sometimes coaster rides are not much fun..and you always should be You.

M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2005-04-13 04:41 AM


Nice flow of words...James
Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
3 posted 2005-04-13 02:02 PM


Thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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