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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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0 posted 2005-04-07 11:24 PM


I stood
with lonely feelings on a corner.
Birds knowing
as they feathered their colors.
Why,
when intelligence seemed so mute,
instinct prevails?
Did the maples also know?
I wondered.
Though sophistication drove by
like any other wave - length.
That,
I was asking for want.
That feeling which stayed with me since
fetal.
Only a child then,
asking for my own toy in life.
Like some divine intervention would release me.
It wasn't till later
I realized.
Someone else was watching... me.

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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-04-08 05:12 AM


Enjoyed..

Goldenrose.

Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.)

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28
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2 posted 2005-04-08 11:14 AM


Thank you Goldenrose....
adagio
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since 2005-03-19
Posts 449
Marrero, La.
3 posted 2005-04-08 01:16 PM


I liked it but it was a bit frightening


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