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Seedling, In Wait
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Seedling, In Wait |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Like seeds in the wind, these thoughts are s c a t t e r e d to and fro here, there and everywhere not to be collected but to fall there disconnected; seedlings detached in their stillness resting in silent hold they lie, dormant to await the coming spring when all things re-new again. A planted seed of thought in wait that it might someday come to bud and bloom; not into negativity but to grow in light more positively. I set these thoughts to d r i f t, so tenderly that they may return and bring re-birth to me. I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I think you've already been rebirthed...especially after reading this beauty...hugs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely this..very gently spoken. Lovely you...sending hugs. For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Spring is in this poem with the smell of rain, and of all good things to come. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
fly high   ~~*~~ I'm Standing on a bridge I'm waitin in the dark I thought that you'd be here by now Theres nothing but the rain ~~**~~ [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-03-2005 03:08 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Donna! wow! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful! Nice flow to the verse as well. Happy Spring. TD |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
always a treat to read your wonderful work, Donna - much enjoyed Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear Donna, when you set your thoughts to drift, we are all the better for them! Tis true~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ladies, you all bless me with your kind words. Thank you and hugs. I really want to care, |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I knew I was going to love this, but I didn't know to what extent! I enjoy your comparison of seed to thought. to the library! miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May all your seeds in wait, come to fruition. An exceptionally fine piece of writing which is filled with your spirit Light.   Love & Light, Linda |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautifully written Donna... I set these thoughts to d r i f t, so tenderly that they may return and bring re-birth to me. Spring has arrived...finally~~ hugs M |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very lovely Donna...and just like your name very gentle too..thank you.. Goldenrose. Love comforteth like sunshine after rain. (William Shakespeare.) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely... I kept highlighting favorite parts... realized I was copying the poem. *G* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Good morning everyone, and thank you each for your kindness. Peace to all. I really want to care, |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
you have captured the soul of mother nature in a flowing voice. adagio |
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