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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Through Others It was a let Mom know kind of moment, a chanced chat, a beating of wings She is older now a quiet gasp was only felt, chills of spreckled hair rising on our arms ~ miles apart, we were, sensitive she is older, and wise No one plans a talk of heart, no one plans a loss of depth no one plans a new door opening and she and she threw me back to my small brief time of visit, piano tinning me here I am a graphic art rumoring in the other room, saying this was me, but I’m not here, I'm here and my friend sister host was not there, no invasion of word, so I just listened to the woman nee child felt her strength gone great. How do you tell a mother her child has grown up…when even in real we deny the growth, we argue an age, not to shield ourselves, no… but to keep innocence solid. Bring it forward…and pray the child grew into adult wisdom, the kinder mentor of dream and sense, sensitivity and kindness, she grew up…she’s a woman now… Acceptance, unsayable. Love knows no bounds, in any woman’s heart. ~*~ To Michelle, and her Mother… both of whom listen |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
She will love this...they both will... A great poem from a grand woman...to one. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweet, Karilea hugs to you, M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SIL, what a lovely poem of reassurance penned in love and friendship. Brought tears to my eyes.  ....jo |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
She is still a child, but a child of wisdom now. All the openness and ready love of a child, but she is also woman, with a woman's way beside the child's way, a woman's spirit within the child she will always be. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Sissie.....sniff...thank you!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie, you are welcome...so very welcome. A special connection, a wondrous moment gave us that moment to know... and we are grateful, those of us who understand, that some connections are just never, ever turned off. Or forgotten... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
library and because this makes me feel really good!!! |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Beyond beautiful thoughts and words. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gosh, I love poets! Especially the one who wrote this poem and the one for whom it was intended ~ and her little angel poestess.  Linda |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you can always feel the sunshine here~ beautiful~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your kind heart shines brightly throughout this fine piece, Karilea. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Yes, sometimes this happens. You shared this in such a gentle way, dear Karilea. Thank you for a precious moment. Love, Margherita |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Very nice write!  ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sunshine, ya really got me here. Yeah i'm ballin my eyes out. Cryin like a baby. Ya really tugged at my heart with this one. So beautiful girly. Thanks for sharin and givin me somethin to really think about. Hugs, Jules |
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