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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2005-03-26 07:22 AM

A Picket Fence

For years I sat a picket fence
On why’s to me that made no sense
Reflecting thoughts of sin and crime
That held me in the flow of time

And in the rapids of each bend
I surely thought this is the end
But time has many twists and turns
Full of whirl pools spins and yearns

Its then I turned to mining skills
To mine the gold that sage did spill
To salve the heat of torments cry
To wash the sigh from out my I

But sage I found to be a stage
Of words that played upon a page
Each one a candle lit of light
To brighten up the dark of night

But night still holds obscurity
Unless night is eternity?

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-03-26 07:42 AM

You wound this one round
back to the end's beginning, Sy...a
perfect circle of one's thought process
from the time that one can...

It's another

So...duly libraried, with lights!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2005-03-26 08:13 AM

caught you this morning

I'm up doing laundry

glad I stayed awake

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-03-26 08:19 AM

Sunshine
Drawing circles in time is just like blowing bubbles.

passing,
Sweet dreams sweety.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2005-03-26 08:42 AM

Of words that played upon a page
Each one a candle lit of light
To brighten up the dark of night

But night still holds obscurity
Unless night is eternity?

Sometimes it can feel like one. *S* Science has never explained how time doesn't move when we're miserable... and flies during moments of heaven! LOL

I like this so very much, my friend...

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

5 posted 2005-03-26 08:46 AM

Sy your words are the candles lighting up the night. Much enjoyed.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2005-03-26 08:52 AM

suthern
Thank you sweet and have a wonderful day.

scorpio
Thank you my friend and you are a friend.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2005-03-26 08:55 AM

But time has many twists and turns
Full of whirl pools spins and yearns

Oh my, it certainly does. I wonder if time ever notices how quickly it is moving?
Love this Seymour. Easter hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2005-03-26 08:58 AM

Chris,
Easter hugs back sweety.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

9 posted 2005-03-26 09:15 AM

"But time has many twists and turns
Full of whirl pools spins and yearns"

Oh my does it ever Sy!
Hope you're having a great weekend
and a blessed Easter to you and yours.
~Bunny hugs & tea, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2005-03-26 09:34 AM

Nancy,
And Bunny hugs back to you, with a

vandana

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11 posted 2005-03-26 10:38 AM

nice write

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2005-03-26 10:57 AM

vandana
Thank you dear.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

13 posted 2005-03-26 06:25 PM

Its then I turned to mining skills
To mine the gold that sage did spill
To salve the heat of torments cry
To wash the sigh from out my I

But sage I found to be a stage
Of words that played upon a page
Each one a candle lit of light
To brighten up the dark of night

But night still holds obscurity
Unless night is eternity?
=============================

Since you are the sage that displays your wisdom upon the page ... I know, that you know...your poetry IS your eternity.

*ww*

It's only words and words are all I have to take your heart away.

Martie

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California

14 posted 2005-03-26 06:33 PM

Sy

I know you'll understand how hard it is to reply to you after JM has...so I'll just agree with her and give you a

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2005-03-26 07:31 PM

JM,
You caught me with my pants down LOL
WW

Martie
I'll accept both and throw a

back.

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