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G. A. Webb
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0 posted 2005-03-23 01:34 PM


Teacher teacher
Can I tell you
How I blush
When I’m with you
I feel the rush
Of love songs singing
Soft and free
Proclaiming how
Our love should be

Teacher teacher
Do I stare
Bear my heart
Show you I care
Expose my love
In countless hues
Hoping that
It’s me you choose

Teacher teacher
I must know now
The power you have
I feel it somehow
Basking in glee
Whilst lost in your gaze
I find I’m transfixed
My heart is ablaze

Teacher teacher
Will you like
The man in me
My ten speed bike
How I stand taller
Then the rest
I’ve beaten them all
I’ve passed the tests

Teacher teacher
Show me the door
And all of the things
I’ve not seen before
Then open my eyes
To your infinite glory
I want the whole truth
Please tell me the story

Teacher teacher
Tell me please
I beg you now
Upon my knees
Will you love me
Strong and true
Or will you leave me
Torn in two

G. A. Webb
03/21/05

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-03-23 05:44 PM


G.A.Webb~
I've read this a couple of times and quite honestly I'm trying to figure out exactly what you're trying to convey ?
Could you enlighten me ?

Of course the first thought that sprung to my mind was of yesterday's court appearance of the teacher charged with having an inappropriate sexual relationship with one of her 14 year old students ... but I'm just not sure if you meant some reference to that situation or not~
Sincerely~
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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G. A. Webb
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2 posted 2005-03-23 06:13 PM


No, this had nothing to do with all that’s been done and said in the media in regards to those teacher/student “love affairs”. I don’t condone that in any way, shape or form. This is simply the thoughts (or as I perceive them as being) of a 10 year old (or there a bouts) with a huge crush on his teacher. No pedophile tendencies here. I am not a teacher nor am I 10 years old, or there a bouts…hehe. Thanks for reading and the reply.

Regret not that which you have done,
Rather that which you haven't


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3 posted 2005-03-23 08:02 PM



Thank you for the lovely email explaining your thoughts on this piece~

I can well imagine a 10 year old with a crush on his teacher thinking in this manner~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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