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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-03-23 08:24 AM


The lesson

I watched a Bee storing honey
He treated it just like money
He flew it home to there egest
To place it in the manifest

Each deposit swelled the hive
To feed the young to stay alive
And each were busy in their way
To meet the needs of every day

Cooperation was the key
To turn the lock of destiny
Maturing to a proper state
To bring about a better fate

Extinction is a hungry mole
It puts a stop to goal and soul
It is the dragon hunts the land
And pours the time of pouring sand

So if we wish to stay and be
Just take note the busy Bee



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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-03-23 08:25 AM


  you are the master of rhyme divine sir Sey.
Well done.  

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-03-23 08:27 AM



Smiling at you
and buzzing over this...






LeeJ
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3 posted 2005-03-23 08:29 AM


so like what your saying is...store up on bee spit?  hehehhehehe

wonderful write, wonderful poem, lovely read.


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-03-23 08:34 AM


Gentle,
Thank you dear.

Sunshine
You are a love.

LeeJ
That's what bee spit is. Good morning sweet.

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5 posted 2005-03-23 09:09 AM


There are lessons to be learned in all of nature's wonders. Love this. hugs, Chris

"The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze."
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Kahlil
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6 posted 2005-03-23 09:29 AM


Sir:  Your wisdom, how true.
I shall fly off into the world
this morning
with a sense of purpose
and joy in my heart.

K

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2005-03-23 09:35 AM


Chris,
You are right.

Kahlil
Thats the way to go. Have a good one.

choshi
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8 posted 2005-03-23 10:41 AM


Ahh yes, "just take note of the busy bee"

Thank you for reminding me to stop and to take note.....~P

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9 posted 2005-03-23 11:08 AM


Good morning, Mr. Bee! ~ I mean, Mr. "T"!

May you forever spread such poetic honey and never ever become extinct!

Loveya!
EA
Bee  Honey

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-03-23 12:04 PM


choshi
And thank you for stopping by.

Earth Angel
Thank you honey bee.

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11 posted 2005-03-23 12:53 PM


what a lesson!

wonderful!

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2005-03-23 01:19 PM


passing,
Thank you sweety

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13 posted 2005-03-23 01:20 PM


Cooperation was the key
To turn the lock of destiny
Maturing to a proper state
To bring about a better fate

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

you are wise BEEond wise.

you always have made me buzzzzzzzz *L*

*ww*

one drop, an ocean ... one seed, the forest ... one leaf, the wind ...
~ take only memories ... leave only footprints ~

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2005-03-23 03:01 PM


Jm,
I'll meet you in the bee hive. LOL

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15 posted 2005-03-25 12:37 PM


LOL... I'm doomed, then. LOL For I'm the type to take note of the busy bee... and become mesmerized by his activities... and neglect my own. LOL I love this, Seymour! *S*
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