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Susan
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walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-03-18 09:57 AM


you finger paint me
in graffiti lust love
tagging my flesh
with your colors
tattooing your name
upon my skin
and I wear you
in gypsy dance pleasure
emblazoned and emboldened
bare before windows
to tempt and tease
the wanton in your eyes

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

© Copyright 2005 s.a.t. - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2005-03-18 10:03 AM


oh yes....softly seductive!  nicely done Susan!
Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-03-18 10:06 AM


thank you Donna -   Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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just out of reach
3 posted 2005-03-18 01:15 PM


Ooooooooooh....I almost missed this beauty!
Keepin this!  Hugs, Chris

You are ice and fire. The touch of you burns my hands like snow.
~Amy Lowell~

passing shadows
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4 posted 2005-03-18 01:43 PM


very nice!
EvocativeVerse2
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5 posted 2005-03-18 02:11 PM


Love it. This is an exquisite piece Susan. Very sensual.
DavePage
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6 posted 2005-03-18 02:16 PM


I do love your writing Susan.

Dave

Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2005-03-18 02:44 PM


my ink begs to color you
from the mrs side
of your lady
to the wicked side
of your gypsy

enjoyed you here babe!!

Susan
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walking the surreal
8 posted 2005-03-18 04:29 PM


Thank you my friends - for your warm and for tagging my poem with your names - you smile me -

Hugs - Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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