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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-11-12 03:43 PM

Vous dites que vous ệtes une lame de l’amour

Thy steel is silver of satin sweep
It glistens in shimmer drape
‘twas forged with passion’s heated temper
And honed to pierce hardened mail

Percerez-vous mon Coeur pour toujours?

Thrust deeply and lay thy mortal wound
Draw not thy blade lest blood should flow
See these arms spread wide in acquiescence
Of the kiss of thy wielded flame?

Vous ệtes mon ombre drapez de l’amour

Descend upon me with measured pace
Let thy campaign encompass all
Sweep thy victory ‘round my shoulders
And let my heart be thy conquest

J’ệtends ma lame à vos pieds dans la reddition

s.a.t.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-11-12 04:00 PM

Je parle la Francais seulement un petit peu. Votre coeur c'est plein d'amour.

Linda

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2004-11-12 04:01 PM

The added lines in French add to the taste
of the poem....You have done very nicely
with it. Makes me want to climb on my
steed and ride.........

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-11-12 04:05 PM

I can't read French at all,
but my-oh-my this was a bit
on the warm side.
Very enticing read.
Very nice indeed!
Wow!!

JL

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-11-12 04:12 PM

Merci beaucoup mes amis - étreintes chaudes de coeur

EA - your heart is filled with love too - and most lovely

Barry - glad I could inspire the hero in you - you are a dear -

JL - glad I could help heat up this chilly day for you - thank you

Hugs all - Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

5 posted 2004-11-12 04:19 PM

femme thy je capturerai le coeur thy pour rendre délaissé connais le métal de mon amour. et j'ai obtenu le chocolat aussi !

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-11-12 04:27 PM

Mmmm - D - chocolat aussi bien que l'amour - queest-ce que plus pourraient une fille demandent ?

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2004-11-12 05:54 PM

Well...I do well to speak english... so I'll not be as clever as some.. not that ever am..lmao

nicely structured ma'am.. and an enjoyable read.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-11-12 09:18 PM

Ah, thank you Ron - much appreciated - as they do in France= kisses to each cheek - mwa, mwa -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

[This message has been edited by Susan (11-12-2004 10:32 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-11-13 11:30 AM

wow!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2004-11-13 11:38 AM

A beautiful song, Susan...lovely!

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