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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
swirl of organza turquoise and diamond cream strong arm round wasp waist last waltz with the falling leaves autumn's final serenade . . . ~myheart~ November 2004 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes, a very lovely tanka this is!! Very much enjoyed the images. Hugs~Nancy Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
beautiful poetry, lovely images! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Thankyou Enchantress & Gentle Spirit.  ~myheart~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful....I can feel the dance through these lovely words Nice soft and greatly appreciated |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Many thanks Lee. ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmm - quite lovely - elegant - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lovely! I feel like being twirled about among the fallen leaves! ~ Although my waist is not as waspish as it once was!  EA |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Thankyou Susan & Earth Angel. ~myheart~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
last waltz with the falling leaves With lines like this, even heavy feet yearn to dance. *S* Beautiful work! |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
suthern, thankyou for your comments. ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You know of course, the only critique that I have is the word last... Although the autumn will display and drop her colored gown, oh the richest steps come back around. This dance should be done daily...maybe twice...giggle. TD |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This is truly beautiful! |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Thankyou ThisDiamond your thoughtful comments are much appreciated. ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is excellent! |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
thankyou passingshadows!! ~myheart~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful images, welcome to pip |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
thankyou Aenimal for the compliment and the welcome !! ~myheart~ Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Delightful imagery, well written / well said! Thank you for sharing this with us. INclan |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Thankyou so much James and INclan. ~myheart~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Lovely Autumn waltz! Deb |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Many thanks Deb! ~myheart~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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