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Mysteria
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0 posted 2004-11-10 02:28 PM




~*Tori Meets A Veteran *~


I had taken my Granddaughter shopping.
There outside the door of our local mall,
Stood an old man selling poppies,
Though now bent, he’d once been tall.

I couldn’t help but notice
As he flashed us a “store-bought” grin,
Around his neck hung a box of poppies,
For a donation you got one on a pin.

Normally I'd just hand him my dollar
Take the poppy and be on my way,
But Tori tugged on my hand that day,
Intent on hearing what he had to say.

“My name is Tori, what’s your name?”,
She smiled a sweet smile up at him.
“I’m Albert, and I was once a soldier,
So I’m selling these poppies on a pin.

Well, Albert’s uniform was now to tight,
It reeked of age and more than one mothball.
Bending down to Tori he put on her poppy,
Winked at her, calling her a little doll.

He said he’d been there for hours,
He did this service gladly every year,
He had so many war stories to tell, but …
His family just didn’t seem to want to hear.

His pride shone on his medals and buttons
As they glinted in the bright afternoon sun.
We let him brag about his feats of valor,
All the battles he’d been in, and won.

Uncles, brothers, sisters, mothers and fathers,
Had done duty for their country. and then some,
He said they were now just all fading pictures
Tucked away in some old musty family album.

For this proud, uniformed man standing there
Somehow I couldn’t help but feel some pity.
Seems a lot of people don’t respect this day,
Any more in the hustle of a modern day city.

This sweet man was someone’s grandfather,
Who went to war keeping his grandkids free,
People were rushing past, ignoring him
Not one stopped to buy his offered poppy.

I guess all they see is a frail old man,
Who chooses to keep living in the past?
I even heard a young man remark in passing,
“How long is this poppy thing going to last?”

Well he had been a respected soldier once,
Answering the call to serve a nation, keep it free.
He and others went to war for all of us;
He stands for the freedom enjoyed by you and me.

Tomorrow when the world is supposed to stand still
While overhead all the war planes go buzzing by,
Let’s show respect for just 2 minutes, that’s all …
Stop, and say a little prayer for those who did die.

I always think of Tori and Albert on November 11th,
And all the things about the wars that he said.
He's lived through two wars, lost a leg, and his son,
2 minutes doesn’t seem long to honor the dead.

Or is it?

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myheart
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1 posted 2004-11-10 02:33 PM


Mysteria, thankyou for sharing this memory with us all. No, we should ever forget, nor should a few minutes out of one day be a bother. Each and everyday we should take time out to honour those taken, those still here, and those continuing to serve.


~myheart~

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2 posted 2004-11-10 02:35 PM




I remember this one Sharon...
Thank you for sharing it with us again this year.
We shall never forget.

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3 posted 2004-11-10 02:43 PM


Sharon, I applaud you on this very important message that you have so eloquently expressed. It appears that Tori has inherited more than just her grandmother's good looks, ~ she has inherited your loving heart.

I hope you send this to newspapers, veteran organizations, magazines etc.

This poem is well worth the read ~ and  remembering!

Love, Peace & Harmony,
Linda

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4 posted 2004-11-10 02:43 PM


Ooops! Just popped back in to save it!

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5 posted 2004-11-10 02:44 PM


Sharon bless your heart for this one...this is so very beautiful!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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6 posted 2004-11-10 02:44 PM


Sharon,
No poppies to offer, but I could give you a big

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7 posted 2004-11-10 05:37 PM


Hi Sharon ... I started to cry when I read this. So many gave so much for us. Our freedom is something we take for granted and how sad that is.

I will never forget walking through Arlington National Cemetery when my uncle, a retired Army man who served 3 terms in Vietnam, passed on. So many white crosses embedded now in my heart.

And how many more will die in Iraq?

hugs and thank you for sharing this.
Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

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8 posted 2004-11-10 06:04 PM


This is a heart tugger! Two minutes is definitely NOT too long. Freedom isn't free - as our veterans will tell us. Thank you for the remembrance.


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9 posted 2004-11-10 09:43 PM


You are all very kind, and I wanted to tell you that today we repeated this incident that actually did happen but two years ago.  My daughter-in-love, and the two girls came to visit and we went out of our way to find some veterans to talk to.  The veterans are apparently visiting schools today talking to students before services tomorrow, and so they were kind of scarce, but we found a couple to listen to.  It felt good     

Remembrance Day means more to me now than just remembering both World Wars.  With trouble being everywhere these days I have modified its meaning a bit to suit the times, and love this day and set it aside to thank all the women too who have shared their men who fight for our freedom, in EVERY country.  Bless them all!

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