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Open Poetry #34

animaltrax 5:59 southbound

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-10 08:58 AM

hello 5:59
rumble your belly
on the steel chopsticks
from here to jersey

you make my coffee stir
earthqaukes think you are cool
but I hear they just want to
rip your ties off

and leave you naked
under their bridges
and spill your stanley steel
thermos full of screamers

down the lap of some 6am news

___________

dark

scribblenote: 5:59 southbound and a 3.2 quake at 5:58
I get so confused

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-11-10 08:59 AM

are you trying to say it left you all shook up? lol.....all that before six am would leave me in a mind boggle for the rest of the day. Enjoyed your views sir.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-11-10 09:02 AM

3.2...a roll in the,
oh wait...
3.2...a wake up call...

there.

Glad to know you're safe.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-11-10 09:03 AM

agreeing with those two gals above me....

another great write....love reading you

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-11-10 05:02 PM

feeling your aftershooks
from the swamps of jersey

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-11-10 05:16 PM

Love your descriptive powers my super pen hero! Enjoyed this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2004-11-10 05:37 PM

To quote Elvis the Pelvis ~ "I'm all shook up!" ~ just reading about it! I can imagine it pales in comparison to actually experiencing the vibrations!

Vividly descriptive, Dear Dark One!

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