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Krawdad
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0 posted 2004-11-06 09:29 PM



                  day 242


                  We are a couple of daydreamers
                  caught in the drift of
                  upwelling currents
                  imagining our ephemeral lives

                  Like pieces of flotsam
                  from ships gone aground
                  we're pulled too far from shore
                  to expect any rescue

                  Clouds will form overhead
                  as we quietly watch

                  When they dissipate
                  everything will have changed





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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-11-06 09:39 PM


"we're pulled too far from shore
                  to expect any rescue"

and sometimes, we don't want to be rescued

enjoyed floating on these wave thoughts

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-11-07 07:28 PM


excellent!
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-11-07 07:32 PM


I love these Kraw...well done!
Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

myheart
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lost in your eyes
4 posted 2004-11-07 07:56 PM


I wonder what day 243 will bring?
~myheart~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2004-11-07 09:02 PM


Krawdad
A gentle write of truth, well done.

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