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Open Poetry #34

Hunger Pains

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-11-02 07:12 PM

Hunger Pains

Sweetheart, how I miss
the sweet nectar
from your lips.

Each new rendezvous with
you makes all of my
dreams come true.

The fulfillment of
my hunger comes
from a kiss
upon your
luscious
lips.

JamesLee
November02
2004

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-11-02 09:32 PM

This is very romantic stuff. I love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-11-02 11:59 PM

The fulfillment of
my hunger comes
from a kiss
upon your
luscious
lips.

Nice *smiling*

Maree

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLachlan~

lil' Angel
Member

since 2003-11-14

Posts 116

3 posted 2004-11-03 12:28 PM

Great poem. I really enjoyed it.

Lil' Angel

"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord." Proverbs 21:30

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2004-11-03 12:28 PM

Ahh to be fulfilled like this. Wonderful sir James

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

5 posted 2004-11-03 06:47 AM

mmmmmmmmmmm...oooo James

I like this...

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2004-11-03 07:20 AM

and it is at these times, we realize what we have or had...
Which reminds me, is it more then coincidence? I think not.

Good structure here
Enjoyed

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

7 posted 2004-11-03 09:45 AM

very good write JamesMichael
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Star T
Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 182
Philadelphia, US

8 posted 2004-11-03 09:49 AM

that was beautiful...u should be sure to let whoever ur talking about see it.

Jesus died that you might live...accept that and u shall be saved.

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