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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-11-01 07:06 AM


Chasing

I chase the rainbows ebb and flow
On every pathway that I go
I reach into each evenings dream
And push the limit of the seem

I am a constant traveler
A weaver of funicular
I spot each highway as I go
And mark the winds and how they flow

But mired are the paths of life
The tune you dance the play of fife
The circumstance of filigree
The pearls you find within the sea

One must catch illusion first
If not your bubble brakes in burst
And you will find the doldrums noon
Underneath a silver moon

Pick a star and make your mark
Each of us a Noah’s Arc



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-11-01 07:09 AM


Hope:

I chase the rainbows ebb and flow
On every pathway that I go
I reach into each evenings dream
And push the limit of the seem

I am a constant traveler
A weaver of funicular
I spot each highway as I go
And mark the winds and how they flow


Reality:

But mired are the paths of life
The tune you dance the play of fife
The circumstance of filigree
The pearls you find within the sea


Plan:

One must catch illusion first

If not your bubble brakes in burst
And you will find the doldrums noon
Underneath a silver moon

~*~

Bravo!
What a way to start the month, Sy...
Everyone must do all they can, regardless...
of any situation.

You are my shining star!



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2 posted 2004-11-01 09:04 AM


Wonderful morning read Sy!
I think I'll set my mark on the second star on the right.
Loved this plan...absolutely love it!
~Morning hugs...and tea?...Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

MGROVES
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3 posted 2004-11-01 09:12 AM


morning sir, a pleasure as always


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-11-01 09:13 AM


Sunshine,
And you are my oasis.

Nancy,
I'll take both, tea and hugs.

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5 posted 2004-11-01 09:13 AM


One must catch illusion first


~smiling~ today is my "illusion" day
hugs
M

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-11-01 09:14 AM


MGROVES
You are kind, thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2004-11-01 09:15 AM


Maureen,
Thank you sweet, glad you enjoyed.

Martie
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8 posted 2004-11-01 01:00 PM


Sy

I needed some uplifting, this morning and this poem gave it to me.  Thank you!  

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-11-01 01:26 PM


Martie
You are a sweetheart.

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10 posted 2004-11-01 01:28 PM


quote:
A weaver of funicular

oh you aint neva lied.  

And you are the King of cool cadenced couplets....

and the Wizard of me winkies.  


*ww*

Poetry is emotion put into measure.
The emotion comes by nature ...
but the measure is acquired by art.

Thomas Hardy


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11 posted 2004-11-01 03:05 PM


Hello, Noah! May I join you in your ark and head for the world's edge and the rainbow's end?
Ark Rainbow 2

Feather tickles,
EA

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2004-11-01 03:42 PM


JM,
And I just love your winkies.


Earth Angel,
All I have left is the bridal suit. LOL


vandana
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13 posted 2004-11-01 04:48 PM


good read
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-11-01 04:59 PM


vandana,
Thank you dear.

Magnus
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15 posted 2004-11-01 05:54 PM


Always enjoy the message Sir Tabin..always
do.  And each morn,  there is always one
more that is just a smidge different...
Such variety.

Margherita
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16 posted 2004-11-01 06:04 PM


quote:
I chase the rainbows ebb and flow
On every pathway that I go
I reach into each evenings dream
And push the limit of the seem





Here is a rainbow for you and I will go and "reach into the evening's dream" ..

Your beginning of the day is my ending ...
so beautiful ..
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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17 posted 2004-11-01 06:20 PM


Magnus
Thank you Barry always enjoy your comment.

Margherita
Thank you for the beautiful rainbow.

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18 posted 2004-11-01 09:10 PM


very cool write Sy...even at night
jwesley
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19 posted 2004-11-01 09:11 PM


Well hello "shining star"  --- got to agree with Sunshine - you do have a way about you and with words....much enjoyed this.

jwesley

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2004-11-01 09:41 PM


jwesley,
Thank you for the read and sweet talk.


Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2004-11-01 09:42 PM


passing,
Hy sweety, thank you.

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