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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-10-31 01:41 PM


Words hold an image that more than pyhsical remains
Is the pen mightier than the sword
Well, die by the sword as you think of words that will delight the world but maybe not your neighbour who doesn't want to be delighted by your words
Words do hold an image captured by words that on an old wall reminded of Germany
When they gave the billboards for graffiti
To allow someone who thought they had talent
To demonstrate
Words are always graffiti because was means to you means nothing to others
We have moved to allowing expression
Maybe the words
Might display a talent we have never seen to display for us
Ideas we have never consider

Dave

I dont support defacing anything but maybe boards for talent woudl be an idea but one to be abused as we seem to want to, these days.



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Gaia
1 posted 2004-10-31 07:04 PM


Interesting write, Dave. The neighborhood I grew up in (southern California) was wall-to-wall graffiti the last time I visited the old haunt. Some of it is actually quite good artwork, and some stores and building owners have allowed all but the gang symbols and names to remain. But I almost always cringe when I see random spray paintings, and prefer a few tastily done wall murals.
Sadly, much of it's like puppy piss on a wall.

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2 posted 2004-10-31 08:51 PM


excellent!
HopeS
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3 posted 2004-10-31 10:52 PM


Over here in Perth , they have set up certain places with billboards where they can show their talent , they hoped it would stop the random spray painters ,some of these guys proved they are very talented  

Hope

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4 posted 2004-11-01 02:47 AM


excellent indeed

I can fly like a penguin

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5 posted 2004-11-01 08:45 AM


tremendous thoughtful ideas...I agree
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6 posted 2004-11-01 09:18 AM


yes excellant


DavePage
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7 posted 2004-11-01 12:44 PM


Thanks everyone

It just seemed a shame to lose talent because of the actions of a mindless few when it, maybe, just requires a little something to allow the outlet of talent and much against the world's flow.

I still believe in a form of National Service as an alternative to prison for minor crimes but the services dont want them and I can understand that.

regards

Dave

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