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The Hour |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Hour The hour strikes to past and dead Where once we were so warmly wed It’s lost within the source of time To clay another force of prime New fodder of a mill of strange To dodder to a finer change To dance within an echoes call The nuance of the cauldrons all And though I try to see what be The process passes dead to me It traces like a silver moon Playing shadows like a tune I hear the drums and play of fife And dance my feet this stay of life I sway within the present core That seems to float on evermore And though I’ll slip around the bend I leave you all my thoughts of end. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Them's mighty fine words sir! Morning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Such an early hour for such ponderous matters... Sway away, Sy...on you, it looks good!  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy continue to leave us your thoughts. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you sweet and good morning to you. Sunshine, Those thoughts were a few days ago.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you friend I'll do my best. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You always leave me pondering Sy... makes my brain click into gear in the morning. LOL.  Excellent write! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Let peace begin with me... ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Excellent is a delicious cookie with our tea. Good morning sweet. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you tucked it away for safekeeping...  Knowing the right time and place to share... as you always do!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You are a wonder of delight. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
New fodder of a mill of strange To dodder to a finer change To dance within an echoes call The nuance of the cauldrons all ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ couplets like those are the reason you wear the crown of waaaay cool me King of clever cadence and rhyme.  I do so love the fodder and dodder of your verse.  *ww*  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 JanetMarie... you IMP! |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well ... I thought this sad actually. Good, but very sad. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Interesting write yet again Seymour. Enjoyed. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, Thank you sweet for the read. Chris, Thank you dear and hugs back. JM, |
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