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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-12-02 12:11 PM

There is nothing that's not
drawn to you.

My hand moves with a sense of
where you are.

Even from a world
away.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-12-02 12:14 PM

good grief I love reading your poetry...makes soft *sighs*

stevebrklynnyc
Member

since 2004-01-04

Posts 292
GA, Camden

2 posted 2004-12-02 12:33 PM

My sentiments exactly. Great post.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2004-12-02 12:39 PM

Sound kinda of a duet maybe ish to my poem air. lol I like. Makes wonder and think.

Juju

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-12-02 02:05 PM

Beautiful...love your writing.

Catrina
Member

since 2004-11-10

Posts 132

5 posted 2004-12-02 03:03 PM

The invisible reaching...
better yet, the sense of the touch...

Well done, Sir.
Thank you.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-12-02 03:43 PM

Very nice - like it

Dave

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

7 posted 2004-12-02 04:28 PM

Eric, I like this.

time prophet
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since 2003-07-30

Posts 371
In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees

8 posted 2004-12-02 06:06 PM

Yes. Fits nicely.

Eric, so few words and a world of vision. Beautifully done.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

9 posted 2004-12-02 10:15 PM

Short, and beautiful.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2004-12-02 10:40 PM

Wow ! Keepin' this !!! Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2004-12-02 10:56 PM

Magnetic!
TD

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2004-12-03 06:45 AM

beautiful!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2004-12-03 07:10 AM

yes, absolutely beautiful!

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

14 posted 2004-12-05 01:22 AM

beautiful

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2004-12-06 04:15 PM

Yes. Absolutely. *S*

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

16 posted 2004-12-06 06:30 PM

And here I stand

with outstretched arms

feeling my Universe

within the palms of my hands

imprinting its song of love

composed just for me

and here we are now

fingers entwined

dancing to the tune

echoing on far away shores.

So beautiful and fulfilling, dear Eric!

I love you.
Margherita

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