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Gathering Whispers |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Steeping in the solitude before the frost of dawn Quietness’ anticipation waves across the lawn The eyes of morning open slowly and let the light lift on Until the stir of energy pervades in full seen sun This time has come conveniently a bring together verse A rhinestone mine of happenings picked clean ago and terse That call in soft heard harmony from everywhere it seems Each moment the adventure that propels my soul in dreams And voices fill the afterglow of shadows small and sheer They talk in low revisions of the most profound so clear And I intently follow to the tunes of petal falls The raising up of questions crease the razed rice paper walls The small so often bolder in the gentleness of time Attests the wandered indigence of glassed and roving mime To lift the curtains hesitant disturbing perfect peace As slippers on the icy dew of hopes that never cease Copyright Kkh 12/05/04 |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
superb, superb you had me hook line and sinker with that opening line, it is just lovely and so true to the morning hours when one allows the steeping Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
morning simmers softly a hush of gold streams through ivory linen, tapping my shoulder i face the day, almost sorry for breaking such perfection. yes, i do so love that transition time too, thanks for bringing this |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ *sigh* *sigh* *sigh* How very, very lovely you pen the dew of morn~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Simply awesome write. Eric |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Each moment the adventure that propels my soul in dreams Yes, very much so, huh? Where might be the next milestone dear heart? Just above the row of hedges, around the next bend... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Lovely write!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
great flow (perfect meter does that  )and you titled it perfectly as soft as silently falling snow, and layered just as startling Enjoyed But then, it's always a treat, Kathy. |
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