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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-12-01 05:20 PM


may I gift the penny-a-liner guillotine
my apology, amande honorable
and wear my hair shirt of cutty wool

to be your bragi voice and dance you
as idun in some whispered lace
with thy amble apples bare

may old deuce of specter
rod stick our sides
with metal maiden daguerreotypes

and flagellum the dance of our logos
bare foot o'r ol' loki's whimper
were we wear our ethereal assunder

thundering as an artist's proof intaglio
_______________

Dark

scribblenote: to do with norse poetry, demons and the texture of passion..

© Copyright 2004 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-12-01 07:43 PM


Aha - takes a Norseman to decipher this one D- lucky for me, I know one   I love the mythology worked into the piece -  

Hugs you -   Susan

p.s. lucky too I have my super secret Viking decoder ring that was passed down to me by Thor himself

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2004-12-01 07:55 PM


now I am thor about you getting the ring
pout..and fuzzy hugs

thanks for the read babe
D

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-12-01 08:22 PM



Smiling...ah, you reach far, and deep
into the well of knowledge
and source...

almost, Sir...almost...bare ledged behavior...

do behave, now...

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