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Open Poetry #34

freestyle: heaven or hell

~DreamChild~
Senior Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 544
in your dreams

0 posted 2004-11-28 01:05 AM

when i freestyle.
some may laugh.
and some may smile.
but some in denial
dont like me
cuz im ~DreamChild~

dont be hating on me
im just expressing myself
hoping what i felt
what i tell
affects someone else

you see
my hearts an open book here
took it right off the shelf
for you to read the stories written there
of heaven and hell.

you may not like where you're going
but that's the places i've been
so be the first to cast the stone
he or she without sin.

~ the stuff dreams are made of ~

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

1 posted 2004-11-28 02:24 AM

Unfortunately it's human nature to "cast stones" because we're prone to look out and not in.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-11-28 05:21 AM

I like your style

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