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Stained soul
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Stained soul |
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SarBear Member
since 2003-06-05
Posts 205Massachusetts 
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Glistening tears roll down my cheeks Turn into diamonds and fall at your feet I’d do just about anything to fall in your arms To win back all the charm If I could go back in time Do it all over again I’d be better Make a lasting impression Have you want to be mine But I’ve lost Lost once again Always ruining things Losing things I’ve gained Hands letting go My soul has been stained With your memory I refuse to let it go So it hurts me Kills me as I go The footsteps Ride out the storm As the thunder Shakes my world It all falls apart You walk away My heart breaks apart My life is incomplete Until you hold me Again |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Even though I want to remind you of the truth that you are complete on your own ... I understand how you feel and you have conveyed your pain quite powerfully. Sadly beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sara~ It is so good to see you~ Heart-rendered penning with some sad, sad ink~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes it's hard to let go, and sometimes we never do |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My soul has been stained With your memory I know this kind of staining Sarah.... very well done gal. |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Amazing!!! Very well written |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Sara I felt so much emotion through your words. Thanks for sharing. Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great, heartfelt writing.Maybe it wasn't your fault this time... Jason |
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