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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-11-20 08:08 AM



No Matter an Age

Do you see me for who I am
even in the darkness
where I secret
those feelings that you
rise in me whenever alone?

Connections exist,
some common, others special.
Those that surprise
leave me with hope
and play upon my inner strength.

Too serious of late, the real
editing my life, giving me satisfaction
through trial and error, even if
it is slow to evolve.
So what is next?

Too many questions, so much to observe.
The holding of hands, always there.
The touching of heart, just a browse away...
And my mind "running free".


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-11-20 08:30 AM


MzWynter~

'The holding of hands, always there.
The touching of heart, just a browse away...'


You breathe such a lovely sigh of thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-11-20 09:13 AM


"Too many questions, so much to observe.
The holding of hands, always there.
The touching of heart, just a browse away...
And my mind "running free"."

Oh I like this Maureen...very much!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Time has cast a spell on you,
   So you won't ever forget me ~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-11-20 09:15 AM


free is good...yes, very good
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4 posted 2004-11-20 02:55 PM


beautiful...

~Alli~

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JL
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5 posted 2004-11-20 03:51 PM


Woowee!  This is an absolutely marvelous write.
Great read.

JL

DavePage
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6 posted 2004-11-20 04:13 PM


Passion

Haven't written somethng to your words in a fair while


Tripping in darkness
To light of secret feelings
Rising connections surprising hope

and play upon my inner strength.

Hearts obscuring vision memories feelings
To run free

In time of thoughts

Dave

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2004-11-20 04:42 PM


feeling free and easy
just kicking up my feet

and reading you today

garysgirl
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8 posted 2004-11-20 06:28 PM


Free is good....very good!!!
Huggers,

Susan
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9 posted 2004-11-20 07:54 PM


to be seen for who we are - yes -

Susan

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