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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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0 posted 2004-11-19 12:45 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

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All I have are my words
So genuine and sincere
'tho I feel you in my heart
How I wish that you were here

Time may be the greatest healer
But it cannot mend my heart
As I express my deep emotions
Through these words I now impart

I never said how much I loved you
In the end, so little time
As I attempt to show my feelings
Through these humble words of rhyme

Dad, I hope that you can read them
And that my love travels far
As I look high up towards heaven
For I'm sure that's where you are

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
~DreamChild~
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1 posted 2004-11-19 12:57 PM


this was a magnifiscent sisplay!
ethome
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2 posted 2004-11-19 04:43 AM


Wow!
What a beautiful tribute!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-11-19 07:18 AM


I wish I could have been so close to my father

a wonderful gift you have given here Sue

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-11-19 01:55 PM


OhSue~
Your gentle words of tender remember give much honor to the memory of your dad~
This touches me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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vandana
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5 posted 2004-11-19 02:17 PM


nice read
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