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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Information Desk For elegance and pastel sentiments please move forward to the sonnet gallery. Turn left for Nature and right for Love. What’s that, sir? Adolescent angst and all the dirty words the little darlings can think of? God bless ’em. Down that hall and turn left. You’ll see the steam coming out the door. Clever toasts and sprightly sayings are in our North Annex, ma’am. No, not that door, ma’am, no poetry through there. That’s the reality section, where babies go hungry and even heroes bleed. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wow! Loved this - and the ending - the reality - that blew me away -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks, Susan, that means the poem worked. I was hoping it would. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
oh Nan....I don't want the babies to go hungry or the hero to die... you did good."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh Nan, this works VERY Well! Where have you been? Welcome home!!! |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
love it!!!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
That’s the reality section, where babies go hungry and even heroes bleed. this made me feel proud to be a part of PIP Tremendous write thank you for sharing |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks, Susan. I don't want it to happen either, but I only control the words-the reality section is beyond my control. And sometimes beyond my understanding. Sunshine-thanks! I never have time to come here anymore, but today has been a slow day so look where I am. Cloud-can I climb up there with you? I've always wanted to see the view from Cloud9. Lee, thanks so much for reading and taking the time to reply. I appreciate it more than you know. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome ending there! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh shadows, thank you for passing by and letting me know! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ You share ponder-worded-thoughts~ Pretty gosh-darned awesome, my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoy your unique style of poetry. You literally grab my attention with every write ~ and I know I'm bound to be in for a surprise ending! You sprinkle your poems with flights of fantasy interspersed with doses of reality. A neat write! Loves 'n smiles, EA |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Hey Marge-it's good to see you. I haven't been around much, maybe I'll have some time this week to catch up. EA-right back atya, girl. I love your stuff, and you always give me a treat. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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