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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2004-07-21 11:40 PM

Black Hole

My heart has been cleft in two. Into the
gorge let spill an eddy of darkness, a
maelstrom of time. Gravitational inflow,
pull to the event horizon all that
made me a man. Conscience, needs, wants; what claim
have I for these? Take them I beseech thee.
Allow me to be as compassionless
as the emptiness in which this black hole
was birthed. Then…only then…I will know rest
and disremember the she whom it was
that made this heartache so unbearable.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

1 posted 2004-07-21 11:49 PM

Allow me to be as compassionless
as the emptiness in which this black hole
was birthed. Then…only then…I will know rest
and disremember the she whom it was
that made this heartache so unbearable

Hope you feel better, EV. Heartache creates wonderful poetry though. Take care,
misc'e

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2004-07-21 11:57 PM

oh hell yeah... fanfriggintastic..you got me wanting to be on my feet testifying... lol stop laughing at me... :P
i so love this i'm going to print it out and keep it with all the other ones.. it's that damn good.. but mostly it's because it says what i so want to say and never seem to do !
::bowing to you:: honored as always to read you my sweet friend... love, me

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

3 posted 2004-07-22 12:57 PM

wow do I know this feeling...my heart goes out to you sir. Very heartfelt write I enjoyed it a great deal, your emotion shines through the entire piece and just pulled at my heartstrings...
~Live and Laugh~

The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2004-07-22 02:21 AM

This is good one.
I know the cure for that but will save it
for later. ;-)

Hugs

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