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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2004-07-21 12:17 PM



I ride in the waves with a dorsal fin.
You probably think I’m a porpoise or dolphin,
but slow down, look carefully, think again.

As small as your little finger,
I am a Knight in shining armor,
the only species (as far as I know)
in which the father is pregnant.
Yes, m'Lady produces the eggs
but I carry them inside
all the way to the delivery date.

For I am a Knight in shining armor,
a tiny finger-sized seahorse,
Genus Hippocampus,
Phylum Chordata,
swimming upright,
my coronet held high,
moving like a hummingbird
within brackish seas
and waving strands of seaweed.
I ride in the waves with a dorsal fin,
as royally as any dolphin.



© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-07-21 12:40 PM


ride on!
JL
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2 posted 2004-07-21 12:50 PM


Nice one!

JL

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inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-07-21 02:14 PM


what an interesting little story here, very true i know
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2004-07-21 02:18 PM


I'm coming back as a seahorse! lol

Seahorse

Loves 'n Laughs,
EA

Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-07-21 02:40 PM


oh yeah, you painted this picture well.

Susan

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LeeJ
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6 posted 2004-07-21 03:16 PM


loved the read and visuals...

good jobber

iliana
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7 posted 2004-07-22 05:37 PM


Oh
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