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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-21 07:10 AM



Plastic Flowers

you are
plastic flowers
all show
and nothing
behind them

"i wish your room had room for two" John Mayer



© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2004-07-21 09:16 AM


reminds me of someone....

hugs
M

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-07-21 12:24 PM


never thought of it that way


JL
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3 posted 2004-07-21 01:15 PM


O-Wow!  Punch, jab, punch!  Ouch!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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4 posted 2004-07-22 07:11 AM


I'll vote with Maureen.... this reminds me of someone...me....

It's shocking how often your words pick up something I'm feeling, at the exact time I'm feeling it....gotta check my innards for surveillance gear!

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Michelle_loves_Mike
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5 posted 2004-07-22 10:35 AM


Ah,,I like this,,,,realy puts it to all the pretty, fake, hollow, people,,that try to get into your life,,,,well done,,,

Michelle

To be held, is all I ask......

Ericc
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6 posted 2004-07-22 03:09 PM


Even plastic inspires to
beauty.

Great write!

Eric

iliana
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7 posted 2004-07-22 05:26 PM


  I am going to remember this one!
vandana
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8 posted 2004-07-22 05:39 PM


enjoyed
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