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Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes

0 posted 2004-07-15 11:33 AM


Drops of love
Falling from the sky
Staining the world
Clearing the streets
Washing the sins
Of a dying world
Explosions clapping the air
Violence mixing
With the howling
Of demons racing
Through the sky
Leading to the silence
Of angels tears

Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again...
http://www.cmlb.net/ringo

© Copyright 2004 Bradly Stott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-07-15 11:37 AM


Deep write man,,,,I like the way it starts,,shifts,,ends back where you started,,,,hits you hard and fast,,,,well enjoyed

Michelle

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2 posted 2004-07-15 12:35 PM


very deep write...got me thinking
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3 posted 2004-07-15 12:40 PM


Well said Brad..good to read you again!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

iliana
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4 posted 2004-07-15 12:43 PM


Ringo, I hear you loud and clear.  Good right!
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5 posted 2004-07-15 01:13 PM


aww such a deep write very good

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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6 posted 2004-07-15 01:48 PM




(big angel hugs) Oh Ringo, it is sooooooo great to read your wonderful poetry again, dearest friend! (sad sigh) I too pray for all the children of the world and their mothers and fathers who don't know what to say or hesitate to say it when they see all the violence and injustice affecting the innocence of the world and them and the angels can tuck them in bed with deepest love every night! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ringo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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7 posted 2004-07-18 12:56 PM


Nice writing...James
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8 posted 2004-07-23 07:46 PM


Please accept my sincerest apologies for not thanking everyone until now... I can only claim life and laziness.

Michelle- As always, much love and hugs.. see you this weekend.

PS- thank you  for reading it.

Nancy Lee- Hugs... Thank you for the kind words.

Iliana- THanks Mucho.... I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Foxy- Thank You.

Noah- You are always so kind with your words... I thank you vwery much.

James- Thanks.

Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again...
http://www.cmlb.net/ringo

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