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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2004-08-18 06:46 AM

Ever changing tempos of legs
Throwing coins on the child mind
Like a passing parade of pure impressions
Going on, without words
Motions of falling objects and orbiting planets

Visions clear…musically precise
Fingers tapping invention, discovering octaves
In a sea of constant motion and intimate world
Tendency to pour out gathering twilight
From a 2nd story window
Classical grassland premises, transmitting forces

Hand over brow, gazing through an unforeseen energy
Deftly inching forward into a
Well dressed & mysterious travel, one fixed speed
If you can’t test a thing it’s not knowledge
But perspective tugging on your sleeve
Wrapping a kind of assertive cloak
Ensnaring the child into dimensional effervesce
Like forefingers held in the air, staggering imagination
Two universes carry parallel, reality and existence

Living this somewhere before
Gravitons in another location
Walking phenomenon, along side us
Loitering discreetly, grand mama’s legacy
Subtonic elements, floating on a sidewalk canopy

Feeling warmth flood through your body
In reassuring gestures...Kaluza-Klein theory
Accelerating soul, irrational modes
Begging for release, in an intimate world
One of which, speaks about circling strings
The other Dimensions, no one speaks of?

[This message has been edited by LeeJ (08-19-2004 06:00 AM).]

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

1 posted 2004-08-18 12:23 PM

My reply would have been sooner, but I got sidetracked looking up Kaluza-Klein theory- ack, waaaay too early in the morning for that kind of physics.

The physics of your writing however, I enjoy any time of day

Banzai!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2004-08-22 10:12 AM

Wow -- this poem should be required reading for every LeeJ fan! What's it doing down here?

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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-08-22 10:15 AM

If you can’t test a thing it’s not knowledge
But perspective tugging on your sleeve

An excellent thought and verse... well said
LeeJ. All of this, for that matter.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-08-23 10:56 AM

"Subtonic elements, floating on a sidewalk canopy"

This line says it all!
Enjoyed this write Lee J!!

JL

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2004-08-23 11:05 AM

WOW!!! You sure do get the mind working early...what an incredible way to start the day....wonderful poem...

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