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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-08-14 04:35 AM


Rain bounced from the pavement,
making black stars, peering
out i listened to your voice as
my heart sank with sheer lonliness.

Monsoon weather was outside
the phone booth, but i was warm
and dry inside with your love.
Your sigh broke a tear free from within me.

Laughter and love, crazy days
of delight and you.Music, art,
beauty, nature, we connect on
so many levels, you are a vital organ of my body.

Look for love and happiness...

© Copyright 2004 P.D - All Rights Reserved
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2004-08-14 04:39 AM


WOW! a vital organ in your body! brilliant  my love! especially the last line....outstanding....you have outdone yourself...

It was a nice day...wasn't it....
of course all my days are nice with you in them!

Love xxxxxx ~ARH your morning glory


"The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968)


Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-08-14 04:45 AM


Yes you are a vital organ..as important as lungs..as brain..as heart..i need all of these to live..you are no different....

Love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxx

Look for love and happiness...

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-08-14 04:48 AM


so sweet
Susan
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walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-08-14 11:09 AM


Such tenderness --

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2004-08-14 01:22 PM


Goldenrose
Well done, enjoyed the read.

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