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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-08-02 08:40 AM



moon quarter on velvet
some gambler day
just flipped from the sun

to other side night
face down lookin up
on a tide slide sky

ocean is my blue shirt
wet denim cling
of a slow swim woman

with lover arms
wanting my skin
as her tattoo jacket

she spends my energy
like indigo saliva
in a dog pant hurry wind

and we pray there is no tomorrow
___________

Dark


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2004-08-02 08:49 AM


to other side night
face down lookin up
on a tide slide sky

ocean is my blue shirt
wet denim cling
of a slow swim woman

with lover arms
wanting my skin
as her tattoo jacket
==========================


do you know how COOL these personifys are?????

you rock!!


tide slide sky

did ya take pics???

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-08-02 08:57 AM


no tomorrow...

only now...

hogging this one...

*click* library...

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-08-02 09:41 AM


What can i say i've yet to say?  your work is groovey!  i hear such rhythm when i read your lines.  

  susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2004-08-02 09:53 AM


Dark Stranger
"with lover arms
wanting my skin
as her tattoo jacket"

Now that is reaching. LOL

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-08-02 01:11 PM


wrapped up warm and cozy within prose as such, how could there be tomorrow's?

Lovely art!

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

6 posted 2004-08-02 07:55 PM


it's always a pleasure DS to read you.

Mxx

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
7 posted 2004-08-02 07:56 PM


Reading your stuff is like taking a walk on the wild side!

Wicked, wicked man! (that's a compliment DS)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-08-02 08:08 PM


holding this moment...
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
9 posted 2004-08-03 08:55 AM


humble thanks to each of you...big hugs too (sorry sy..handshake for you)  DS
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