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Dark Poetry #1

This Ache Withen Me

summer
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa

0 posted 1999-12-11 04:19 AM

I thought of myself as a lady,never really needing more than a kiss.Until You.Oh, what has become of me.Seems like it was just last night it all happend.Have you ever ben trapped in the same stream of thoughts for hours,even days.Never have I spoke the words I gave you that night or had I heard them from someone.You didnt know it but i waited for you to wake,oh how I waited patiently for you to wake and consume me again.It rained in my house that night.Warm drops of extacy,passion and heat soaked my hair.Tears of tainted love swept my face.So confused,for a breif moment I forgot who I was, let alone what I beleived in.So they say what feels good may not always be good for you.Fait knew then I would have you for only one night.So now I lay wrestless trying to fall back into an old dream of loves temporary perfeftions.

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 1999-12-11 06:02 AM

Dreams...temporary...love Funny, they all do seem to go hand in hand. Good poem.

michael

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

2 posted 1999-12-11 10:38 AM

Excellent piece summer. I can relate to the feeling of being traaped in the same thoughts for hours and days. The emotions are truly captured and felt here.

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

3 posted 1999-12-11 02:40 PM

Beautifully captured emotions in this.

Enjoyed

Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 1999-12-11 05:01 PM

Emotions, yesterdays and dreams great stuff

The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

FreeByrd
Member

since 1999-11-03

Posts 267

5 posted 1999-12-12 09:22 AM

Wonderful portrayal of passion experienced,

and trying to recapture that time again.

Nicely done

-RS

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