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lonely heart |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
i walk through hallowed hallways, that were once my heart. once filled with lifegiving blood, that coursed through strong veins. now they are all empty, and covered with dust. what was once a burning ember, now just cold blackened ashes. the wind blows cold and strong, in the spaces that are now unfilled. there are no remnants of the tears, that were once abundant. torn and tattered love letters, litter the floor that once flowed life. sounds echoe from the chambers, where the steady beat was recanted. footprints scattered in the dust, where you also once walked through my heart. me. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
my apologies, i have no idea how this got posted twice. mo. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Don't worry Mo I shall get rid of the second one  This was sad my friend, hopefully the writing is exorcising the demons. (HUGS) my friend. The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Love the ending, mojar, Definately a haunting piece. Michael |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
Aah, you have taken me through the tour of a heart that appears to have alot in common with mine. I will never understand why the hearts so full of passion and emotion end up being the lonely ones. A sad and lovely piece, mo. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Mo... the very last line brought memories of someone I loved. to flood my heart. Jenny Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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mojar Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 169granbury, texas, usa |
isis, michael, danni, and jenny, it seems that we all have a common denominator, and i thank you all for sharing that. i guess we should form a club or something. mo. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
We did!! The journey to Utopia Club The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate. ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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medusa Junior Member
since 1999-12-09
Posts 23 |
oh i loved it! have you read "interview with the vampire" by Anne Rice???? you captured the soul of Louis even though a fictional character!!! it was a great piece |
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