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wolfie97
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA

0 posted 1999-10-21 07:12 PM



I do not regret my past,
But the pain I endure
When I remember
Every moment I spent with you.

I don't feel sorry
For myself or you.
Because of what you did to me
Every moment I spent with you.

Though the good times
Creep into my blackened mind
The hell I went through feels like
Every moment I spent with you.

You said, "please forgive me"
But could anyone abide by that
When you thought of so many others
Every moment I spent with you.

I cannot forgive
I cannot forget,
But all I can think about is
Every moment I spent with you.

So, I left you, said good-bye.
You took your ring, broke my heart
And left me here alone to think of
Every moment I spent with you.

It's just so hard to recover
When I still smell your hair,
Taste your lips, and remember
Every moment I spent with you.

I'll give myself time
I'll try to have fun
I'll even try to convince myself
I never spent a moment with you.

So good bye my love
Someday you'll see
That we could have been perfect
If you didn't cheat on me.

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

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Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
1 posted 1999-10-21 08:30 PM


Garrett......this is the best and most emotional poem I have read. I know the pain you speak of and the memories that walk in your head.

My wish for you is that your heart will mend soon and your bitterness will subside for the one who did you WRONG.



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Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

----Ray Bradbury---



Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-22 09:56 AM


Excellent,this tug at my heart strings.Very well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

JennyLee
Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
3 posted 1999-10-22 10:12 AM


Oh, be calm my heart! Very well done


Jenny

[This message has been edited by JennyLee (edited 10-22-1999).]

wolfie97
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA
4 posted 1999-10-22 06:30 PM


Thank you for your replies! This was so hard to write. The tears swelled up as I typed my heart to sedation. The good words you said make me want to keep trying to write. Thanks again!

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Garrett 'sneaky' Gall

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