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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
To love one another, Till death do us part, Forsaking all others… A life time of love? A lifetime is a long, so very long time And what sun shines in purgatory When the love runs out? passions meet, vows betrayed, betrayal undressed for all to see friendship, trust, respect all blown to pieces pain blotting out reality, why and how Something so wonderful has Turned to utter darkness and despair? Forsaking all others? If I care to see another sunrise, The smile of a child…I must… But yet I pray it be the death of me. I don't remember agreeing to this, Did I prick my finger when I signed my name for surely we did this in God's name? Till death do us part? Does that mean that when your pain filled eyes finally blankly stare skyward and your heart beats no more I shall look to heaven and thank God For his mercy? Now I lay me down to sleep I pray the Lord my last breath to take ------------------ ©1999 Iloveit |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
iloveit, I LOVE IT!! Glad to be reading your words here in the Dark! Jenny  |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Til death us do part.....when the love has died tis the death.Time to part.Nicely done! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
thanks both of you this was one of the darkest times in my life and writing about it helped me alot |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
OUCH!...this one has some serious bite to it. I can honest say I've shared in this feeling to the fullest extent. You have my every sympathy/empathy. Cutting piece, nicely done. ------------------ Michael Anderson Is all that we see or seem but a dream within a dream? |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
if you have shared this, then you also have my hugs back....sigh....wouldn't wish this on anyone, thanks |
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BoyToy Junior Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 23everett, wa, usa |
Excellent piece! I have recently felt this, and it is wonderful to see someone put it into words, it's a gift. Thank you ------------------ A dark, black past is my most valued possession...D. Mustaine |
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