Dark Poetry #1 |
Wind of Peace |
devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
I hear it blow through me Through the trees as well Touching all in its path And leaving its chill on all it touches Soothing souls that accept it And gently massaging away pain And I cannot be soothed Nor do I wish to be massaged To have life back into a dead heart What a stunning sensation Where would I dwell Without loneliness as a home And who would I love Without the need to love hate And who would love me Without the ability to accept The Wind of Peace. Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Good poem, but i am interested what inspired this one. And who would I love Without the need to love hate And who would love me Without the ability to accept The Wind of Peace. This sounds like lines i might write. Reading my thoughts i see. |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
well jer, this one wasnt really inspired as much as it was just spilled out i think. its tough being the kind of person that wont let things rest and will not accept a life without drama. i think maybe it only seems like i enjoy the drama that seems to surround me, and even if i wanted to i dont think i could avoid it. and its a tough realization that without the hate you have for things in your life, what would you love, and who would love you for having that hate and not being able to be a peaceful person. if any of that makes sense. it does to my life. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
And I cannot be soothed Nor do I wish to be massaged To have life back into a dead heart What a stunning sensation These lines really spoke to me, I suppose we all build little walls around to keep our selves from being hurt again ...and sometimes don't want to let anything pass through those walls well done ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Interesting poem, love hate, what an interesting concept. Hope you have more under your sleave... Much love, One love, pEACE |
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