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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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0 posted 2000-01-23 02:08 PM


Minutes fade into hours...then slowly turn into days,
Time seems like an eternity, frozen in winters gray haze.

Futures hold no promises, lost to residual love,
Nightfall calls in the silence-hovering over from above.

Whispered songs and verses search for meaning and rhyme,
Desperately looking for reasons, embracing these moments in time.

Memories console and comfort-your words return in poetic cascade,
Believing in this light-I will heal and keep the promises made.

Time will eventually release me, this pain will be spared,
Living in the lessons learned, the gifts of this love shared.

Janet Marie-1/10/00

© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
armanca
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 211
Tennessee
1 posted 2000-01-23 02:34 PM


Lovely poem Janet.  Very well written.  *smile*


Carman

Stevia
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since 1999-11-25
Posts 28

2 posted 2000-01-23 05:08 PM


I do look for that light that you supposedly offer through your poem. I do hope that time does heal, because its been a while, and I am still hurting.i loved your poem.
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2000-01-23 05:11 PM


Very good...light at the end, I like that!  

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-01-23 06:10 PM


Enjoyed this Janet Marie.  I too like the ending lessons learned and hope are great teachers  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


Denise
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5 posted 2000-01-23 06:15 PM


This is beautiful, Janet!

Denise

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-01-24 04:07 PM


thank you so much guys, for the kind words and encouragement, Everyone here has made me feel SO welcome, in each area that I have posted. You all are so talented and amazing. Everytime I visit I am so inspired.
To Stevia...as time heals our hearts the light shines brighter and warmer...I'm finding a lot of light in this place...Im hoping you too are finding yours.
take care... Janet Marie

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