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Hard Up!
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Hard Up! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I think it's so funny I'm laughing at two who actually believe that their words are true. Hard up I am for living life the way that I choose but I'm not the one who's singing the blues. They question my reasons, while questioning my rhyme their vision is blurred because they are to blind. It's ok that they speak their mind but for certain they'll have no more of my time!! {venting stuff...don'tcha just hate fair weather friends!} It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ You got 'em 'spot on' girlie friend~ *Huglets* to you most sincere poetess and friend~ *HUGLETS*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Grover, thanks much! Margie I am proud to call you friend, to bad they thought they were dealing with a "dumb blonde" geez.... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Donna - those type of people really irk me too! Surround yourself with bright, giving spirits. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
lol...people think I dont have many friends... some ways that probably true, but ya know what Chris? The people that know me are true friends, these type people, they are just acquantances. Maybe I'm to picky... nah........  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
how true. enjoyed this, thanks for sharing |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
No..you're not too picky.. and I'll just bet you have many real true friends. ~Hugs to you sweet lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna I can count on one hand the people that I know are true friends....Good strong spirited poem here. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Donna, I was going to post something like what Martie did, but she beat me to it. Your poem brings back realizations I went through in the past and you could not have verbalized my feelings at that time any better! Good work! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you go girl! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You wrote this for me, right?  |
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