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Betrayal |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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Shadows slowly creeping, Over tear-stained walls of mind, Bitter, salty memories, In serpentine rewind. My heart bleeds ammonia, Gone is the red of life, Drained from the soul of me, By a lover's knife. ~ Just recalling a difficult time in my life. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, dear Linda, this one took my breath away for the intensity of pain in it. Sending you much love. Hope, you remember with detachment, so that it does not hurt anymore. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita ~ You have such a kind and compassionate heart. Fortunatlely, by the grace of God, I can recall such memories with complete detachment! My new life fills me with such joy! Loving hugs, Linda |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
That was really good, I truely enjoyed it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Linda this is so sad... I'm happy you're past this time now...and happy. Hugs~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hugs you... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, That was before you became an Angel. Well done. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Sad but well written Linda..thank you.. Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Linda, those hurtful times do come to mind when least expected sometimes. Glad to read that it's not now. Hugs  Ethel |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh my, that line about your heart bleeding ammonia. That's a great image. Well done! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you capture pain and sadness and deep hurt very powerfully here - it is too bad we must experience this kind of pain in our lives - Paul |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
And this brought back some memories to me too sweets....good job.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Goodness, I am sorry for any pain you have felt. You sure did write about it so well. Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad things are better for you |
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Lost Awhile Junior Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 17UK |
Thank you for sharing such pain. And for letting us know in your repolies that you are happy now. I for one would have worried for you otherwise! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Strong emotions... in well captured images... Regards sudhir |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
 ok i'm better now *sniffle* honestly that was well written |
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